O Captain! My Captain! by Walt Whitman is a poem in honor of President Abraham Lincoln. Abraham Lincoln struggle in the civil war was the battle he guides to the victory. This poem delivered an important message, of the civil war. For example, the work of guiding the army for the victory of our country, the freedom of the slave. In conclusion the deliverance of the Country for the freedom.
The poem approve the sadness in the moment of Abraham Lincoln death, all the battle he has been face for the freedom of the country. Moreover the brave sage he is. And the end, his death, make us appear the sadness on our face.
The poem also use repetition, to remember us the main idea of the poem.
Thursday, January 29, 2009
Monday, January 26, 2009
Belief
He tells us, we can
He tells to believe
He tells us that we can
I if just believe in
Some did not believe at the beginning
But he did,
In 2008, some faces were OD,
He did it, he can
We were behind him in his election
He never give up, because it is his dream
He is a perseverance guy,
He believe in his dream,
And it come true cause he can
I, maybe a kid but I learn much in this
ELECTION
Now I believe
I can do everything I want,
Everything that I can if I just believe in.
This is a history,
that I will tell my children in the future,
BELIEVE your dream.
Friday, January 23, 2009
Inauguration poem response
Praise songs for the day
A poem written and recited by Elizabeth Alexander, is the most impressive poem that was selected as the most excited poem ever. This poem talked about the hope, the believe, and the way we are looking for the future.
At the first read " praise songs for the day" tittle of the poem, and the knowledge I had that the poem is going to report on the Election, I had the feeling that the next lines of the poem is for the believe and the future and our dream of our beautiful country, The United States of America. Reading the some verses of the poem especially,
A poem written and recited by Elizabeth Alexander, is the most impressive poem that was selected as the most excited poem ever. This poem talked about the hope, the believe, and the way we are looking for the future.
At the first read " praise songs for the day" tittle of the poem, and the knowledge I had that the poem is going to report on the Election, I had the feeling that the next lines of the poem is for the believe and the future and our dream of our beautiful country, The United States of America. Reading the some verses of the poem especially,
A woman and her son wait for the bus.
A farmer considers the changing sky.
A teacher says, Take out your pencils. Begin.
Each line represent our life of everyday, the way we are living more over our regular activities. For example, every woman with their child, hope and their dream are the best future of their children. The farmer, considering the hanging of the sky, for the plants to grow up, and the changing of the sky, the father sky to cry for the raining and the plants to grow up, for the chance to sell some vegetable food from their farm. Moreover, the teachers doing their students, cause it is their job and hoping for their students to be the ones that will change the country a better place to live , plus, to bring the hope back. This three lines are talking about the hope of every person and all their hope. They belief, they believe in for the change to be bring by the President elected Barack Obama.
I know there’s something better down the road.
We need to find a place where we are safe.
We walk into that which we cannot yet see.
Saturday, January 10, 2009
Reading reponses#15
Tittle: Fifteen
Author: Eve Bunting
Page read: 1-End
This book right about Eve Bunting, is one of the small book we read. This book is a romance book, talking , Jordan been 15, and began loving, Neil a 19 years old. Since she knew Neil, she has as soon as this sentiment of love toward Neil. She never has time to say it, but used to try. Neil, old than Jordan of 4 years of difference, and just use to protect Jordan, as a little sister. Jordan cannot support Neil thinking that she stills little even at her turning 15 years old, birth day. At her birthday, she had a diner, with her family instead of a party. But after the dinner, she went to a party of Clay, a friend, who is a boy. She went with Neil as her date. When they went to the party Neil and Clay uses to fight. That was the point where Neil used to be more protectif. The point was that, Neil ask Jordan to dance, when Clay was using to do too. So Jordan felt so unique because two boys were fighting about her. But Neil let Clay dance with Jordan. But did not appreciate by the way Clay was touching, and giving drink to Jordan. Actually, she was having fun, and dancing with Clay, unappropriate. Neil stop them but Jordan did not let it go.She tells Neil to get out and to live her alone. He did it, but still waiting outside, in case something is wrong. Lucky is Jordan, to have somebody, who cares about her even what she says, Neil knows and never give up, of the words she said. But signal or late, she found out that Neil was right,, because, after Neil is out, Clay began some nasty action that she did not believe could happen, firstable, Clay lie to Jordan mom, that his mom will be there at the party, and secondable she threw Neil his love outside because of her, moreover, she let herself almost to Clay who wanted to kiss her and do stuff. So she went to the bathroom, wash her face and go outside, crying. But luckely, she found Neil waiting, patiently, who still have his hands open for Jordan. She felt sorry, excuse herself for the bad atiitude, and promess to say he will never do something like that. Neil understand her, because she is a teenager. They became together, as sister and brother. Additionaly, Jordan still waiting for the next summer when she will turn 16 years old and wait for Neil, or how Nail is her relationship will be.
"Say it at loud I love you" mabye next summer,
no more in the heart but at loud,
I will say
I love you.
Author: Eve Bunting
Page read: 1-End
This book right about Eve Bunting, is one of the small book we read. This book is a romance book, talking , Jordan been 15, and began loving, Neil a 19 years old. Since she knew Neil, she has as soon as this sentiment of love toward Neil. She never has time to say it, but used to try. Neil, old than Jordan of 4 years of difference, and just use to protect Jordan, as a little sister. Jordan cannot support Neil thinking that she stills little even at her turning 15 years old, birth day. At her birthday, she had a diner, with her family instead of a party. But after the dinner, she went to a party of Clay, a friend, who is a boy. She went with Neil as her date. When they went to the party Neil and Clay uses to fight. That was the point where Neil used to be more protectif. The point was that, Neil ask Jordan to dance, when Clay was using to do too. So Jordan felt so unique because two boys were fighting about her. But Neil let Clay dance with Jordan. But did not appreciate by the way Clay was touching, and giving drink to Jordan. Actually, she was having fun, and dancing with Clay, unappropriate. Neil stop them but Jordan did not let it go.She tells Neil to get out and to live her alone. He did it, but still waiting outside, in case something is wrong. Lucky is Jordan, to have somebody, who cares about her even what she says, Neil knows and never give up, of the words she said. But signal or late, she found out that Neil was right,, because, after Neil is out, Clay began some nasty action that she did not believe could happen, firstable, Clay lie to Jordan mom, that his mom will be there at the party, and secondable she threw Neil his love outside because of her, moreover, she let herself almost to Clay who wanted to kiss her and do stuff. So she went to the bathroom, wash her face and go outside, crying. But luckely, she found Neil waiting, patiently, who still have his hands open for Jordan. She felt sorry, excuse herself for the bad atiitude, and promess to say he will never do something like that. Neil understand her, because she is a teenager. They became together, as sister and brother. Additionaly, Jordan still waiting for the next summer when she will turn 16 years old and wait for Neil, or how Nail is her relationship will be.
"Say it at loud I love you" mabye next summer,
no more in the heart but at loud,
I will say
I love you.
Saturday, January 3, 2009
Reading responses#14
Tittle: Nobody knows but me
Author: Eve Bunting
Page read:1-end
Nobody knows but me is a small book write by Eve Bunting. Ellen is a girl in love with Leo but still going out with the wrong boy George.
Ellen kissing george but her heart belongs to Leo Carlton. She just smell the parfum of George and feel sorry again because for her she is kissing Leo. Ellen is a girl that love Leo, but is going out with George. George is that bad boy, he is intelligent, you just have to ask him anything as the techer did, and he always answer, but never put his hand up to answer. Ellen is proud of her boyfriend but still have her heart hugs on Leo's. Leo has also a crush on Vicki but not on Ellen the one who like him. Only Leo knows what she is feeling about the whole trouble she is having inside her. Nobody knows but her. Ellen watching Leo watching Vicki. Actually it was like a crazy merry-go-around. But what if George watching her watching Leo, watching Vicki. It is kind of funny but not to Ellen, I guess.
Nobody knows what I feel about you,
Nobody knows but me.
Nobody knows how the touch of your hand
change my world to a new wonderland.
Nobody knows but me.
It was the song she sings a lot about that relate to Leo.
The ball party is coming. And George ask his girlfriend for the party. What can she say than Yes? Yes!duh? But actually asking herself why it can't be Leo, that like her as George do, the one that ask her for the dance? The ball dance is coming, and it's the ball match.
At the football game, Leo has an accident, he broke his leg, when he had the ball and nobody was watching his back for protect him, so he get hurt. Ellen wanted to cry. The ambulance came for reduce the pain of Leo, and treat him. Sadly, he went to the hospital. I infer that, the dance is not going to be great, and specialy for Ellen, even the team. Nobody knows how I feel about you, nobody knows but me, he sang with her trumpet for get rid of the bad feeling she is feeling.
After the party night. Ellen get confused. She went to the hospital, for see Leo, and how he is feeling. But when she went, Vicki still there and other friends were talking and saying stuff. Leo, talk about George as being smart as anyone think, when Ellen entered, and say hi. There was nothing to much that they discuss about. Everybody went home. And only Ellen and Leo was in the hospital room. And she end up by saying that she is waiting for George. Actually mabye a make up story for stay, hang out and talk with Leo. They talk and it end up with a quiet. Then, Ellen prefer go outside and wait for George until he come inside. She ran down stair and out into the sunshine waiting for George.
_The End
Author: Eve Bunting
Page read:1-end
Nobody knows but me is a small book write by Eve Bunting. Ellen is a girl in love with Leo but still going out with the wrong boy George.
Ellen kissing george but her heart belongs to Leo Carlton. She just smell the parfum of George and feel sorry again because for her she is kissing Leo. Ellen is a girl that love Leo, but is going out with George. George is that bad boy, he is intelligent, you just have to ask him anything as the techer did, and he always answer, but never put his hand up to answer. Ellen is proud of her boyfriend but still have her heart hugs on Leo's. Leo has also a crush on Vicki but not on Ellen the one who like him. Only Leo knows what she is feeling about the whole trouble she is having inside her. Nobody knows but her. Ellen watching Leo watching Vicki. Actually it was like a crazy merry-go-around. But what if George watching her watching Leo, watching Vicki. It is kind of funny but not to Ellen, I guess.
Nobody knows what I feel about you,
Nobody knows but me.
Nobody knows how the touch of your hand
change my world to a new wonderland.
Nobody knows but me.
It was the song she sings a lot about that relate to Leo.
The ball party is coming. And George ask his girlfriend for the party. What can she say than Yes? Yes!duh? But actually asking herself why it can't be Leo, that like her as George do, the one that ask her for the dance? The ball dance is coming, and it's the ball match.
At the football game, Leo has an accident, he broke his leg, when he had the ball and nobody was watching his back for protect him, so he get hurt. Ellen wanted to cry. The ambulance came for reduce the pain of Leo, and treat him. Sadly, he went to the hospital. I infer that, the dance is not going to be great, and specialy for Ellen, even the team. Nobody knows how I feel about you, nobody knows but me, he sang with her trumpet for get rid of the bad feeling she is feeling.
After the party night. Ellen get confused. She went to the hospital, for see Leo, and how he is feeling. But when she went, Vicki still there and other friends were talking and saying stuff. Leo, talk about George as being smart as anyone think, when Ellen entered, and say hi. There was nothing to much that they discuss about. Everybody went home. And only Ellen and Leo was in the hospital room. And she end up by saying that she is waiting for George. Actually mabye a make up story for stay, hang out and talk with Leo. They talk and it end up with a quiet. Then, Ellen prefer go outside and wait for George until he come inside. She ran down stair and out into the sunshine waiting for George.
_The End
Subscribe to:
Comments (Atom)