The bee surprise

Once upon a time,
So far in the country of mine,
happen to be the girl, that play
the bee, she is playing with everyday day.
Her head over the bee,
She thinks to be,
talking with a bee.

The bee always next to her
the colorful bee with talk with her.
Bee her diary book,
Bee every walk she took.
One time, came the miserable,
day, when the mother nature,
separate their way.

Bee, the cute handsome insect
lost on the way home, to detect.
detect on the girl.

Three days without
a signal of the precious bee out,
sad was the girl face,
the course of the way to the bee race
against herself,
on the way to look for the bee itself,
against her own shades for go fast
but so far she could, her tears last.

Five days later,
the bee came after,
after all the races made
Bee come back fade,
and with her family
and the happily.

the girl face smile
and all the mile
that separate them
is now near and close

It was an upon a time
It all happen.

This poem wrote by me Peniel Ahama, has the affection of friendship between a bee and a girl. My thoughts before write this poem is that, i think about something that could be unbelievable and that could be happen in the upon a time. So I think about it. And I love writing and I wish one day I could be a writer. Poetry is a way to tell what you are feeling in some words. It is to impress the reader, to visualizing the action by words. So thinking to write a story about a bee and a girl. The theme about my poetry define " love''. I think that love is the best thing on earth. If you love everybody as friend there will not be a fight, nothing bad between each other. The earth will be more a better place to ever live on. I hope you love this poem.
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