Reading reponses#10

Burned

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Is Pattyn is going to got out with Dereck? what about Justin?and being with an unbelieve boy, what about his family?
Well after the left home, Dereck say" see you monday".
That seem as a promise, huh? At home she writes everthing that happen, in the journal entry, she wrote everything that happen and hopeful Dereck saying how beautiful she is, but still does not know why because she looked at herself in the mirror and dhe thinks she is dieskin with an unpresentable face. At monday they meet each other, Dereck came to her when she and her sister Jackie, when he smiled and asked if she can talk with her for a minute. At a quiet place then he began like this:
_"I knowI am not exatly your type" he added.
_"he is not my type? where could be this is going but bad?
_"what I mean is that I am not a mormon,mabye we are not alike at all
yeah, he was a chataubriand and she was a humburger, we can tell.
Then he touched her cheek, and say"But I 'd really like to see you again."
_"Why?" Pattyn shouted
_ "does that mean no? he asked
_"No, I just want to know why.
_I do not know... because you are smart, funny
_ funny as a witty or as in entertaining?
_And you're not impressive anyone
_ I know i couldn't impress anyone.
_ I happen to like you. Isn't that a good enough reason ?
_"I like you too Dereck"
Then they make a plan to go to a friend ,Brent's party.(Absolutely as date.why not?) Then they make their first kiss brightly, calmly.And it was Patty first kiss.( Never went out with someone)
There plan worked great. They went to boyfrien and girlfriend; Suddenly she does not even care about Justin anymore. There love was great. But nobody in her families knew. They spent times together, more she get respect from everbody and get popular.
But there love grew apart when one of her friend talk about her and Dereck going out, then the mom tell Pattyn mom,. Pattyn mom was not suprise at all because she knew something like that was happening but did not know it was not a mormon boy, an unbelieve boy,a non croyant boy. She was depressed. Then everything blew.
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