Reading reponses#11

Tittle: Burned
Author:Ellen Hopskin
Page read:105_229

After Pattyn found out the trouble gain. Pattyn and Dereck was having a good time where they learn to shoot the guns. They were having a good time, when they heard Pattyn Dad coming by the way. Rapidly they range theirself put mint in the mouth then began by acting like nothing is going on. When Pattyn dad arrived, he asks what was going on there, Pattyn imediately respond that they were shooting guns. Pattyn Dad that already know what is going on between them so he says
"Only god know what you were doing here" then add" Pattyn come over here, and you Dereck do never come near my daughter again, never, or I will kill you" he added. Pattyn try to defend but what can he does in front of her dad with an agressive voice? nothing!
At home there was terrible and mean things she declares to her mother, and Dad that was trying to to stop her, his life, his love, the one he likes , to see him( Dereck) again. Truthly, openly, she said it, painfuly her parents get it. For the first time his Dad slaped her as he does to her mom sometimes, when she responded to her Dad to never osed again.
According to my own view:
In my point of view she is right, but her parents want the best of her,but not doing it in the right way. I will apologize for the mistake by not telling them that I had a boyfriend that is not a mormon boy. Then tell them how much I like him, and tell them what I have seen in him, and how he is respectful.) And if they still arguing me with an agressive voice after I do this respectful thing by apologize according of what I did bad, I can get nervous and mabye quiet crying or tell them what I have to do or why I have to do it and then get out. Cause I did my best. What I think Pattyn did it is that she was nervous, it was her first crush taking away and this is not going to be easy; her parents should not just come and forcing her, they should easily and trying to understand what her child have in her mind; and if the child is not right they will tell her what is better for her, but not force her to break up, for example if Pattyn mom say that he wants a breakup, officialy Pattyn dad will be drepressed because he is losting the love of his heart. So Pattyn in my point of view is right, but should just be patient, not nervous and say bad things to her parents. And in somecase, she is absoluetely rigth100% right, why? because her parents as old person should not abuse a first crush, of a kid that is always good, respectful, and ending a crush like that to a little girl with abuse, nervous, shouting, is a mess, because the kid can get bad, crazy, real crazy, this is something that every parents should know.Ending love with nervous, insulting, attitude, get things a lot mess. It should with love, comprehension of the kid, and understood.
End of point of view